OK here ARE SOME manga pages that m making ....PLZ HELP ME IMPROVE IT
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OK HERE IT GOES .....
so till now i was jst designing characters but i now feel tat i should also specialize in making special effects and i am damn BAD AT IT.
SO plz anyone can tell me hw i am gonna put some DETAILS IN THESE BACKGROUND EFFECTS and surroundings . if you want you can JST DOWNLOAD IT AND SHOW TO ME HERE .
ALSO m bad at representing some SFX( sounds) in manga so help wit tat too.
heres another page . and i completed it ... jst wanna know if more can be done on it or no... plz help wit tis too
what software ya using?
its manga studio ex 4 for sketches, microsoft paint for dialog box , photoshop cs5 for some effects ....
tats it
I don't understand how should I read this.
ITS SOMEWHERE in middle of the page so GEL'S (top ones) dialog comes first. then the below ones....
but if u want you can read the below ones nd then the top ones....(IF U LIKE)
I AM NOT BOTHERED ABOUT THE DILOGS JUST tell me how can i improve more in presentation of drawings , special effects. SFX's etc
plz......
ok first the only thing you need is to study how to draw backgrounds, know how to shade some polygons and make them look like a destroyed rock or something.
and second, don't make too many things happening in only one panel,
you should've made a panel with the guy talking while holding his phone,
then next panel the guy throws his phone, while the guy saying on the phone wait
another panel a rocket launching
and another last panel the guy with an awesome pose meeting his end.
you just made all those into just one panel where it should be 4 or 5 scenes. which is why it's difficult to understand.
I wasn't talking about the dialogues. I was talking about which frame should I see first and which second. I don't know the order on how it should be read this.Originally Posted by trilokcool3
Please, could you write a littler bit better? Is hard for me to understand you.
omg .... I AM STILL A NOOB...
OK then i will define it more later. Actually i only designed the character, later on i made some dialog boxes.
OK TO THE MAIN POINT
yeah i got tat i can make those rocks but i dont know how to detail it. IT WILL BE BETTER IF YOU SHOW ME HOW TO DRAW .
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