To me the torso is way too thin. She needs a bit more thickness with that shape tho because as is now it looks like she's rearranged her organs and bones for a thinner waist (which is possible with years of corset training) but also makes it look like one blow to the abdomen and she's down for the count. The little shine marks on the breasts should be higher up IMO to make it look like they are fuller because now they look like droopy water balloons. The left her right breas I think should splay out a bit more (fuller. Wider in the direction of the arm) and her neck is to thin I think.
This is still an amazing piece and I'm awed by you're skill. The curves she has going on and the style are just amazing.