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Fragile Love (short-story)
(note: I made this a year ago on another website. its kinda sad, but I hope you like it.)
I turned around and smiled when I saw Erin running towards me waving. Her green eyes sparkled in the sunlight and her black hair bounced around as she ran, glinting every so often.
I waved back and she smiled. She finally reached me and excitedly said, “Guess what? You know that movie that was totally sold out?”
“The Hunger Games?” (A/N: Its not actually a movie yet it’s a book, I haven’t read it but I have been told about it)
“That’s the one, well my friend got two tickets for her and me but something came up so she couldn’t go.”
She paused for a moment to catch her breath, she started speaking again but much calmer, “She gave me both tickets and said to bring some one else… So I was wondering…”
Her face turned a light pink and she avoided eye contact by looking at the ground.
“If you’d maybe like to go?” She finished.
Then it was my turn to blush, I thought for a moment then nodded, “Sure.”
She looked back up and grinned, “Great! It starts at 7:00, do you want to meet at the theater?”
“Yeah, lets do that.”
She nodded and handed me my ticket. Then she waved, “I’ll see you at seven then!” I waved back and she walked off towards home. I did the same so that I could get ready for tonight.
Thirty minutes before seven I finished combing through my sandy brown hair and grabbed my jacket.
“I’m taking the car mom!” I yelled as I grabbed the silver car keys and headed to the garage.
“Alright, drive safe!” She yelled back.
I hopped into the drivers seat of the blue car and started the engine. Then I drove off to the theater.
Once there, I parked the car and saw Erin leaning against the wall close to the theater entrance. I got out and waved to her, she smiled and waved back.
I went over and with ought saying much, we walked into the building.
We got our popcorn, drinks, and snacks then took our seats in the movie. We watched the movie together, and during the sad parts Erin cried a little. I would never admit it to her, but I cried a bit too.
After the movie it had started to rain outside. Lightening flashed and thunder roared.
“Hey Keith?” Erin poked me on the shoulder.
“Can I get a ride with you? I walked her and its raining so…”
I nodded, “Of course you can, come on.”
I grabbed her hand and led her outside. We got into the car and I drove in the direction of her house.
We talked and laughed, we even quoted the movie that we had just seen.
“Hey? Remember when-”
Erin froze in the middle of her sentence and her eyes widened. I took my eyes off of her for a second and looked at the road to see an oncoming car.
“Look out!” Erin yelled.
I tried to swerve out of the way but it was to late, our cars collided and I blacked out.
When I came to I felt a numb pain in my head, chest, left arm and leg. It didn’t hurt to bad because of the shock I was in. I found my self on the grass at the side of the road.
With ought moving my head my eyes came to my car and the one that crashed into us. The car that collided with ours was on the opposite side of the road beat up pretty bad. My car was on the side that we crashed on, and it was on fire.
As I watched my burning car a thought came into my head. Erin could still be in the car!
“Erin…” I choked out.
My eyes wildly looked around until they came to a limp figure about five feet away. I tried to get up, but I wasn’t strong enough. So I dragged my self the five feet and as I got closer I realized that it was Erin.
Her eyes fluttered open and her green eyes were very dull.
“Keith…” She whispered.
She had a gash on the side of her head and a large slice on her chest. Her right leg was obviously broken and there was a gash on her left.
Erin smiled despite how much pain she must have been in.
“You don’t look very good,” she whispered.
I could feel tears stream down my face and when they fell they landed in the pool of blood around her.
She grabbed my hand in a weak grasp.
“Don’t cry Keith.” She said as tears welled up in her eyes, “You need to be tough.”
“But I…I don’t want to live with ought you.”
“You may have to, I can feel my life slipping away.”
Hearing that broke my heart in two, and the tears fell faster.
“No…no you can’t…you can’t leave me…please!” I squeezed her hand and it started to rain again.
She smiled, “The moon really makes your blue eyes shine, Keith. I love you, and I’m sorry but I have to leave.”
Her eyes fluttered shut, and I screamed out, my voice cracking, “No! You can’t leave me! I love you to Erin, you can’t leave!”
My tears blended in with the rain and fell into Erin’s blood mixing around.
I herd sirens and two medics soon came and put Erin and I on Gurneys. They tried to pry my hands from Erin’s and I told them, “Please, let me stay with her.”
They put us both in the ambulance and after that, I blacked out.
When I woke up, I had iv’s in my arm. My mom, dad, and older sister were around my bed.
“Hey bro, how are you doing?” My sister asked, but instead of answering I asked my own question, “Erin, is Erin okay?”
My sister shook her head, “I’m sorry Keith…”
Tears started streaming down my face again.
“And you should know that it wasn’t your fault. The ones who crashed into you were drunken idiots.”
My sister added attempting to cheer me up.
I nodded slowly only half listening, still crying, I asked, “C-could you guys leave me alone for a second?”
They nodded and walked out of the room.
I love you Erin. I thought, Rest in peace. I’ll never love anyone else. Love, is so fragile.
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