Gunzet: YEAAAA, that eye is....it needs to be poked out. You're right bout the green part covering the black though. And you know, I thought to same thing with the nose but with the ref I have, it's actually pretty apart from the nose. I haven't haven't worked in all the shading yet, but things always screw up when I add more shadows with human faces.....But I will be working some more shadows in there. Maybe I can see if moving in the cheek will make it look all right. Thanks for the thoughtful crit!
Spider: For once, my lips didn't come out like thin paper strips.
Dead: Thanks! I was trying to go for SOME sort of theme....