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    101 Dalmations Member Prince of Angels's Avatar
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    PoA's Notes: The only thing I could really find wrong with it is the fact that the light shining in her eye, it seems like its coming from two different light sources. The left (her right) seemse to be coming from the general area of your number of posts and the right (her left) eye's source seems to be coming from the general area of the your avatar. Other than that great! I really like the pose and her bow.
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    Super Senior Member Demonfyre's Avatar
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    It's looking great so far it's good to see you got the slope on the shoulders, as for the waist make sure it curves nicely, you will find females are made up of nice curvy shapes for a more feminine look

    The things that stand out to me is first of all is that your pose looks a bit akward, I actually tried mimicing the pose in a mirror and it wasn't particularily comfortable, she also looks like she could fall over but that is up for debate so in future just be careful, I would suggest looking into the centre line of gravity to help prevent future issues with your poses looking like they are about to fall over, the second thing is I think that the thighs are different sizes however I can't tell for sure with measuring them, also the left foot is very thin, make it broaden out more towards the bottom where the toes would be lastly, and this a suggestion, try to draw outlines of the breasts because it will help with how you place the torso, help with clothing folds when you add clothes and will help with placement and how the arms join etc, its just a suggestion though, personally I find it helpfu so do it if you want to

    I hope this helps you're making good progress, keep it up
    Last edited by Demonfyre; 08-09-2012 at 07:47 PM.

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    999 Knights Member AlmanacnamedTime's Avatar
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    You are improving, but check this out specifically:
    Nose and mouth look odd. Torso is short, and the hips are a bit wide.
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    The torso looks a bit too small, but that's all I could see.
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    Thanks guys This is definitely helping me,and hopefully I will correct my mistakes and get better

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    Last edited by tag654; 08-09-2012 at 11:30 PM.

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    999 Knights Member AlmanacnamedTime's Avatar
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    You're welcome. *thinking* Man I should probably upload some stuff to my dead art thread.
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    Demonfyre is pretty spot on with his crit, so I figured I'd give you a red line backing up what he said and adding a couple other things I noticed. One thing that I didn't specifically mention was that the feet aren't normally that large vertically - a general rule of thumb is about a half head height for the feet. Also, you seem to be going for the knock kneed pose in which you normally have rotation of the legs internally making it so that the feet are also rotated inwards. So you'll see the outside of the feet. Hopefully this helps a bit.

    At any rate, it definitely looks like you're improving. Keep working at it.

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    Regular Member tag654's Avatar
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    Ok thanks nisaren,lol

    I was drawing sideways on my paper and thats mostly why the pose looks like that...But ill try and keep in mind the C.O.G concept...when doing my poses.And yea,I have a hard time with the knees curving inwards poses...They are pretty challeging to me.

    Thanks.

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    So what I did here was loosely everything,I Need to learn more on in this one kinda picture.Idk,if it shows that ive improved any - probably the C.O.G concept,but other than that idk.So tell me your thoughts

    Still trying to work on folds,lol
    I get they appear at joints and bends-pulling....though they get hard to know where to place :/

    and I now notice the feet thing lol....gosh im a mess haha

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    Last edited by tag654; 08-12-2012 at 03:00 AM.

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    999 Knights Member AlmanacnamedTime's Avatar
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    Her hips should be higher. Limbs are a bit thin.
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