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    Critique KAP's drawings

    These are a couple of my doodles that I drew a couple days ago and I just wanted to see what other people thought of them
    Sorry for the image quality these were taken with my iPad camera
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    The images got flipped, sorry about that I'm not sure how to fix that

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    Welcome to the forums

    You have some nice doodles there! You need some work on the hands but they're not bad. (They're probly better than mine :P)
    It seems like you got basic anatomy down though the right arm and left ankle in the last one could be retouched. Ummm... Try giving the bodies a bit of shading, they're pretty flat especially in the second one.

    I don't think I can help you with the flipped images, I dunt have an iPad P; But if you use a computer you can use this website: http://www.picresize.com/edit

    I'd love to see some new drawings from you soon!
    Miaaam...

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    Thanks for the critique Dluzions,
    hands I think are hard for everyone and usually I try to hide them
    Thanks!

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    Hands can be difficult, but don't try and hide them, better off practicing heaps to get them right. Loving the progress so far, I look forward to seeing more!

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    Thanks Cloudy.

    Here's what I've been drawing recently

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    I attempted to colour the one picture
    It turned out ok, I think
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    Not sure why I coloured the hair blue, though
    Last edited by KAP; 07-29-2014 at 01:10 AM.

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    It's either me or your style but your eyes are really close to the jaw line. I'm not saying it's bad but if it's your style then I won't mind. Apart from that everything else seems good.

    However I can't seem to see the last two. They just show up as icons.
    Miaaam...

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    I fixed the last two pictures, although now they are thumbnails, but at least you can see them
    @Dluzions, thanks! I hadn't noticed that before.

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    yo,

    The drawing look nice especially the detail in the clothes and the staff in the first one. The hair around the head looks a too big mostly in the last drawing in my opinion (maybe this is just because you wanted it this way).

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    Looking good!! I like the varied poses you try.

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    Thanks Aragori and Cloudy!
    Here's my latest drawings, is the girls arm to long?

    My attempt at drawing a guy,
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    And I coloured my other picture from the last post (And changed it some)
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    I'm not sure if this is a good way to do all of the shading and highlights, when I colour it I just make the base colour lighter or darker. Should I be adding more of a range of colours in? (I hope that made sense)
    Thanks

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