Well I like the story's plot. I am guessing that it is a other worldly being who is passing judgment on the world?
Anywho, the main flaw I saw was the grammar. You misspelled several words, like when that guy with the spiky hair said, 'strenght'. But I kind of assume your native language isn't English. If I am wrong, you definitely should work on that. Over all, the comic isn't bad. It could use some more work, ie better character design(just my preference), but nothing more practice wouldn't solve.
Any ways, good luck.
Oh, and can you fix the pages to make them bigger? They were small and hard to read unless I stared close at the computer.
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