Phoenix's Art| New drawing: Umbrella Sky

[Sylux]

Holy shit you're getting fucking good

[Phoenix]

Hi again guys.

Just wanted to show off my newest deviant ID.
It's a Disney styled drawing of me wearing a Mickey Mouse hat.. :P

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[Phoenix]

Just wanted to share a work in progress of Ariel!
I'm in a Disney mood lately :P

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[Demonfyre]

Her arm is looking dislocated, and her waist is pretty thin (even though I know Ariel in the movie has a really thin waist, but i'm going to point it out anyway for you). I really like this Disney fan art you have been drawing recently, I especially love the flow in Ariel's hair :3

[JJJorgie]

^Seconded. Also, her head is extremely long, Disney style or not. Other that that it looks great

[Phoenix]

Thanks for your input. It's funny... sometimes you don't see the obvious yourself!
But thats the good thing about this being drawn on the pc - its easy to go in and edit!

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Took your advice, and changed the things you pointed out. + the mouth.. wasn't happy with it before. Is now though

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[darkmousysminion]

Hi there . This is beautiful. Would look wondaful all cleaned up I'm sure. I did a redline of my thoughts:

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[Sylux]

Her face seems a bit long imo.

[Phoenix]

Many thanks Chii! Really great input! Some of the things you pointed out, have I already thought about, but the rest I can use! Thanks.

Again, this was just a sketch

[Phoenix]

Decided to try and draw a portrait using my new tablet.
This is what I ended up with:

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Used this as reference: http://dahlig.deviantart.com/art/Umbrella-Sky-67965371