Tag's Light-Novel "Hanako" ( W.I.P)

[tag654]

Well Before I start,I want to say a few things,one this is copyrighted so far....so It cant be stolen,so please don't try

And lastly,I'm open to comments,questions,help(),and or critiques on the overall story or advice for it to get better....BTW- This is long so just bear with it XD

This is the original copy from when Me and my writer came up with..so you'll find comments from some people in our group.first part is a timeline and then the other part which is the FULL Storyline:Enjoy.

Actually found out it errors out when I paste the storyline,so go to this
link:http://www.scribd.com/doc/73156503/Hanako-Storyline

-Tag


use this one,if ur getting trouble with the other:

http://www.mediafire.com/?ba4lmawyjz4wnfp


*update* on recent comment

For some reason,I seem to get an error when I try to post the whole thing,so thats why I have these links here.