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Thread: Tag's Light-Novel "Hanako" ( W.I.P)

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    ****UPDATE****

    This is an update just to see if anyone wants to critique some works of mine.

    So,I found an editor about 4 weeks ago,and he agreed to teach me and help me out.He has been giving me these assignments of diffrent genres and such.

    For example the first one was,

    http://kingfromhatena.deviantart.com/art/Unconcious-363378783?ga_submit_new=10%253A1365035037

    The topic was a 2-paged story to start branching out from my original story...

    to get me to test my limits with different genre's...

    Ill post more if someone comments

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    - Bringing this thread back -As I have finished my first 5 pages,though I have about 10 as of now....

    For those who are really literate.Please let me know any mistakes or anything that I can do to make this better,and anything I can refrence from.My goal is for a Light Novel.

    Im using this guide as a reference as for the length of chapters and such : http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Light-Novel

    Thanks.

    First Chapter (beta) -

    http://kingfromhatena.deviantart.com/art/Hanako-First-Five-Pages-390386616?q=gallery%3AKingFromHatena&qo=0
    Last edited by tag654; 10-05-2013 at 12:22 AM.

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    You are doing well. I am curious though what made you pick that name?
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    I pegged you as a sadist, nyuck nyuck.
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    If you took the time to read this, you can just call me Al, or Stan.

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    Hanako = Flower. You must support a flower for it to blossom. If you choose not to care for it,then it will surely die. It was just a name at first,but then i started to think about how it might integrate into the story and came up with something along those lines.

    Kinda like Bleach,how it kinda sounds like a name,but has a different meaning to the writer.

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    Makes sense.

    Also quick thing; Hanako means little flower.
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    If you took the time to read this, you can just call me Al, or Stan.

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    That makes the meaning even deeper :P


    [EDITED] [UPDATED]

    So,I see that there are still many people looking at this thread and will continue too.I come here very seldomly now,but if I ever have questions or if people start to ask questions and critique my somewhat finished chapte,then we can surely keep this thread going :P

    If you wish to read my hard and heart felt first chapter,you may find it here:


    http://kingfromhatena.deviantart.com...romHatena&qo=0


    Again I thank all who have helped me and supported me with getting me at least this far. I have much more to go,whether I finish in a year,or 10 years,it will be a story the world will not forget,and I hope that everyone who reads it thinks forward to the idea too,thanks.

    -Tag
    Last edited by tag654; 10-05-2013 at 12:49 AM.

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