This is an update just to see if anyone wants to critique some works of mine.

So,I found an editor about 4 weeks ago,and he agreed to teach me and help me out.He has been giving me these assignments of diffrent genres and such.

For example the first one was,


The topic was a 2-paged story to start branching out from my original story...

to get me to test my limits with different genre's...

Ill post more if someone comments