****UPDATE****

This is an update just to see if anyone wants to critique some works of mine.

So,I found an editor about 4 weeks ago,and he agreed to teach me and help me out.He has been giving me these assignments of diffrent genres and such.

For example the first one was,

http://kingfromhatena.deviantart.com/art/Unconcious-363378783?ga_submit_new=10%253A1365035037

The topic was a 2-paged story to start branching out from my original story...

to get me to test my limits with different genre's...

Ill post more if someone comments