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    Super Senior Member Celestial-Fox's Avatar
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    SPOILER! :

    Passive voice:
    She became angered by the situation.

    The situation angered her.

    As a rule, active voice is more engaging than passive. In journalism, writing must be 100% in active. In fiction, passive voice is allowed sometimes for artistic styling. Just try to avoid it as much as you can.
    Last edited by Celestial-Fox; 12-25-2012 at 03:54 AM.


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