Last edited by darkmousysminion; 12-13-2011 at 06:45 PM.
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Heeey, you're baaack! I'm diggin' the logo, especially the syntax of it, haha. It reminds me of my stay in Japan. XD The gradient placement and color is nice, and I like the semi-transparent stroke edges, too.
Last edited by Celestial-Fox; 11-17-2011 at 03:03 PM.
Reason: WHY DO I MAKE TYPOS IN EVERY LAST ONE OF MY POSTS
Ruler of the Seventh Empire
Well whaddya know, it's Chii! bout time you popped back around, lol. Love the logo piece, is that what you're into now?
I agree w/ Ceefy and Gunz: this is an awesome design! And my favorite color <3
Anywho, the only thing I might suggest, and it's not a criticism, is not cutting off the thumb and the top music notes. That's the only thing. I really like the whole concept :3
Did you do the font yourself? It's really cool!
お帰りチーさま、信じられないぃーーーー！（笑） よかったけど、たぶんすばらしいアーチストになったん だろうOTL
Last edited by Sutari; 11-18-2011 at 05:20 AM.
UPDATE:storyboard n' stuff
And thanks for the compliments, you analyze my logo techniques well although semi-transparent stroke edges...donde?
GunZet: ha ha hey! So there are older MT peeps on here, I am pleasantly surprised. Thank you and this is...a piece of what I've been doing. I like to think of myself as a varied artist.
BD: D'aw thanku. Ah, yeah, that happened only because this is a preview. I usually make a point of ensuring logos are without borders. I appreciate the comment though, very much.
I did not make the font, I believe it's called...:can't remember: SOMETHING, I will look that up.
OK, Chii has a little more sleep and a Japanese presentation out of the way so in the tiny bits of free time I have between twiddling my thumbs at home and wandering over to my 彼氏の家 (this may be unfair for those who cannot read japanese o.O), I'mma post something perhaps *slightly* cooler than the logo.
Warning: there is slightly suggestive content in here of mature material. No nudity but if you feel you might be offended, don't click on it.
Look! A Storyboard!
Ha ha. This is what a storyboard looks like for Chii. It has arrows zooming all over the place and boxes and random chicken scratch people doing naughty things (shh only in this one and...maybe a couple others).
In a nutshell, not very pretty but kinda cool because it turns into these later:
Errors be plenty. Hopefully not abominable, especially what with the ref that goes into poses these days. I need to fix the Nikhil's (lower panel guy's) right arm and hand. It looks fugly.
Props for anyone who recognizes the cups, hint: they will be red with white rims and filled with icky beer.
Anyone wanna guess the scenerio? the page is super underfinished. Workin on that.
I'll probably say more later but I'm tired of typing.
Last edited by darkmousysminion; 11-18-2011 at 10:39 PM.
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They're drunk and have let go entirely of their inhibitions and are about to make out like crazy.
...just a stab in the dark.
lol knew I could count on you Cypress, nailed it.
The story's not my idea but I have to draw it this way for the client.
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I love your art and all, but once I saw the bottom left part of the storyboard, I wtf'd. I mean, I see pants coming off.
I'm sorry, are you opposed to sexuality? I wouldn't show actually nudity or any kind of mature content here on MT without warning but I wasn't sure what people could make of the scribbles in the storyboard.
Originally Posted by jaidurn
Thank you for the art love. I actually don't usually draw this kind of thing and even if I did, I'm heterosexual and would draw females and males.
I want to notify everyone: I DID NOT DECIDE THE ACTUAL CONTENT OF THIS COMIC OR STORYBOARD. I AM DRAWING THIS FOR A CLIENT, MY UNIVERSITY'S HEALTH CARE CENTER WHO WANTS TO MAKE A SERIES ABOUT COLLEGE STUDENTS' ROMANTIC LIVES AND WHERE THEY EITHER MADE GOOD OR BAD CHOICES. THE POINT IS TO REMIND THE COLLEGE COMMUNITY ABOUT THINGS LIKE STDs and OTHER DANGERS. THE COMIC WILL NOT HAVE ACTUAL NUDITY, ONLY SUGGESTIONS OF THIS PARTICULAR PERSON'S STORY.
BTW, he's actually putting his pants on : )
Last edited by darkmousysminion; 11-18-2011 at 10:38 PM.