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Thread: A story with Kim Ratchet

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    Lucky Member corastaur's Avatar
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    Haha I am definitely a romantic! I read shoujo manga, I love romance movies and Im a fan of books with some romance in them (I'll gladly list my favorites). I love those cute little romantic moments with the guy you like. In spite of how much I love romance, i found this to be too cheesy. At this point I really don't care about the characters... You have to make me love them and root for their relationship before all that becomes bearable. At this point it seems so out of character for maxx.

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    maybe, but I am still thinking of making them kiss. maybe not the speach but the kiss... what do you think?

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    I'd be down with them kissing. It might be cool if the chapter just ended with the kiss, sort of like a cliff hanger "how is she going to respond" type of thing. Yes? No? Also I feel like its sort of dramatic, like the kiss just speaks for itself.

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    I was going to leave them alone then road trip and keep her guessing, although they are together
    Then I was going to put a heart-to-heart between Kim and Zoe.

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    sweet! sounds good

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    sorry this is taking too long. I am currently working on a bunny doll so that I can make em for christmas and then I will make a stick-figure style manga of what I got so far, since I want to start it visual, although I lack the character designs per say....

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