Well, I've been going through a phase of resketching lately, I'd love some critique on how to make everything that much better;
A little more added:
Started trying to B&W it, failing, I'm gonna go back and redo this later;
+ Needs more muscle definition
+ Less airbrushy looking shading
+ Lighter shading on the face for sure, his nose is making him look like a lion
+ Probably needs more creases in his pants too.
Other than that, fire away, there's gotta be more.
Next up, I'll let you click this one rather than post it, I don't like putting up NSFW stuff right off the bat;
Folds in pants, but I don't know how to fix this, any tips? I'm crap with folds.
Table just doesn't look right, perspective needs a little sorting.
Linked because the entire image stretches the forum super far;
I can wholely say that I'm super proud of this one, but where there's a will, there's a way and there's ALWAYS something that needs to be fixed.
Their hands need sorting, I know what I'm doing here so I'll be editing that while you're critiquing everything else.
Last up is my recent piece. I've been wanting to make this look as perfect as possible x_x. It's NSFW and does have cocks which is why I'm giving you the option to click instead of throwing it in your face.
Known issues and I REALLY want help with this;
Clothes. I have never coloured fabric before. Where am I going wrong?