Well, I've been going through a phase of resketching lately, I'd love some critique on how to make everything that much better;

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Comparison;


A little more added:


Started trying to B&W it, failing, I'm gonna go back and redo this later;


Known issues;
+ Needs more muscle definition
+ Less airbrushy looking shading
+ Lighter shading on the face for sure, his nose is making him look like a lion
+ Probably needs more creases in his pants too.

Other than that, fire away, there's gotta be more.



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Next up, I'll let you click this one rather than post it, I don't like putting up NSFW stuff right off the bat;



Known issues:
Folds in pants, but I don't know how to fix this, any tips? I'm crap with folds.
Table just doesn't look right, perspective needs a little sorting.



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Linked because the entire image stretches the forum super far;

Clicky Clicky!

I can wholely say that I'm super proud of this one, but where there's a will, there's a way and there's ALWAYS something that needs to be fixed.

Known Issues:
Their hands need sorting, I know what I'm doing here so I'll be editing that while you're critiquing everything else.



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Last up is my recent piece. I've been wanting to make this look as perfect as possible x_x. It's NSFW and does have cocks which is why I'm giving you the option to click instead of throwing it in your face.



Known issues and I REALLY want help with this;
Clothes. I have never coloured fabric before. Where am I going wrong?



Well...fire away.