Quote Originally Posted by ram View Post
One advice, Just make sure it's completely different from the most famous ones, Cause it's already obvious in one glimpse.


By altering the complete world policy people might not look it as the same.

In story making we don't think about Characters only or Progress only, were the creator of their whole world and never forget that.
that's what i was saying about cliche, and that's probably what Halo was saying about done before, it's obvious immediatly