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    thanks! (:

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    Three Trio Tres Member Kenzieroo's Avatar
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    Silver stems on broken roses
    A black cat waits sits and poses

    Rain that cry's
    Black bird that dives

    The aroma of death under are noses

  3. #33
    Quote Originally Posted by Matt View Post
    Ooh, poetry. My least favorite thing in creative writing class last year. My teacher even told us all NOT to try for rhymes. I'll give it a shot.

    Lilacs:
    A repugnant odor
    Shameless beauty
    Plucked by filthy hands
    Hands drenched
    in my blood
    my sweat
    my tears

    Ten years'
    memories adrift
    in the ocean of loss
    its waves tainted
    with my blood
    my sweat
    my tears

    I lay, defeated
    in the bloody waves
    And a new voice
    prods past scars
    and seals old scrapes

    Dare I gamble again?
    Dare I risk my heart?
    Dare I accept this sweet smile?

    I take the open hand
    It smells of lilacs
    of innocence, of beauty
    of life, of hope

    She is the last
    to whom I bestow
    My blood
    my sweat
    my tears

    Shall I again be lost
    in the sea of sorrow?
    But for my heart
    I do not fear
    For it matters not
    beside her soul


    No revision. Couldn't even see more than 5 lines at a time. This is the kind of thing I'd only write with a lack of sleep and foggy contacts. I dress up a simple, shallow message that I have no experience in myself with amateur poetic language. It's a poem based on stereotypes, now that I think of it. I still haven't re-read it, because I know if I do, I'll probably delete it.
    even if you have no exp it sure sounds like it

  4. #34
    i think ill have a go at this

    The trees are all cold lost their colors
    and the snow falls slow
    he lost the only person that ever gave a dam
    ,to them. The grass is black and the heat is a wall
    the sky is black and the heat is a wall but he does not feel the heat
    .People are screeming inside the church and out. The look on his face is one ill never forget.
    "I was told there was a god, where WHERE IS YOUR GOD!!!!!! as it falls apart not hell nor heaven Intervenes
    and the sad truth is seen in mine eyes alone for humans are scared little things that cling to being happy even if that means the real truth is gone." I learned NO GOD that day, that only man can do what he wants no god will ever give him victory no god will hear his voice no god will save his skin or bless him and to change the world man has to do something, good or bad or neither. There is no god he said to me as the flames engulfed the cross.

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    Three Trio Tres Member Kenzieroo's Avatar
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    I went to the beach a few weeks ago, I was staring at the fire.

    'Fire'

    Fire is our light
    Light to soul


    Sparks are the daring
    Bold in their travels

    Smoke is the masses
    Never straying far from others

    Coal is the warm of heart
    Loving and caring to all

    Wood is the ldealists
    Continuing the fire

    Fire is idea
    As long as ideas forum fire burns

    Fire is light
    Light to soul

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    I'm not that really good at poems and the only thing I can do is Free Verse. Plus, I only make "dark" or "foreboding" poems. :/ sucks for me, eh?

    -Phoenix Down-
    After what has taken over me
    Will I ever find
    What drives me
    To this insane edge between whats right
    And what should not be touched
    In the ashes of my own battle
    I shall be reborn again
    Rising from the ashes
    To cast aside what was and what should have never been
    And becoming something new
    Just to do it all over again
    For every two minutes of glamour, there are eight hours of hard work."


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    Three Trio Tres Member Kenzieroo's Avatar
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    My best poems take all of one minute to make, it's like someone just puts it in my brain.
    Don't take life to seriously, no one ever makes it out alive.

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    Poems are not my strongest point but I would like to try, Maybe I'll look for one that I did recently and post it on here, if it's alright with Kenziero Sorry but I'm also a very anti-social person.

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    Three Trio Tres Member Kenzieroo's Avatar
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    Everyone's there own person, whatever floats your boat Emi.
    Don't take life to seriously, no one ever makes it out alive.

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    (Awesome, Thank you. Oh and here is one I did just near halloween, didn't think I'd find something so creepy...I think.)
    NIGHTMARES
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    Night has its dark powers a brewing.
    I can’t see thy friends any longer.
    Ghouls and goblins take thy friends to a dark territory.
    Hear thy screams from miles away.
    Tall shadows lurk every corner of the forest.
    Many friends and families cry for thy help.
    Apparitions visit thy living.
    Reapers come for the next soul.
    Eternal nightmares stay with thee forever.
    Sweet slumber no more.

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