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    Three Trio Tres Member Kenzieroo's Avatar
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    Poems

    Come on, post a poem. You know you wanna.
    So here is MINE!

    ~Mother Nature~

    She has not forgotten
    Nor forgiven
    She flutters in the wind
    She dances at every passer by
    She gleams with every look you give
    She wilts with every touch
    She has not forgotten
    Nor forgiven
    Though we only touched
    Once.

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    You know you wanna
    Don't be embaressed
    No one will make fun of jou!


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    Ooh, free verse. I think I'll quickly write something too.

    Pure

    I cut a white ribbon for you today
    Twisting curls and tangled swirls
    Coiling silk and summer pearls.

    Hoping, like the lark that sings on winter's night,
    Waiting, like the star that glows behind the clouds,
    Dreaming, like the child that murmurs in my heart.

    I cut a white ribbon for you today
    To braid into your raven hair
    And saw that you were gone.

    Then I remembered
    What was, and might have been.
    Last edited by Hamachi; 10-08-2011 at 03:50 AM.

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    Three Trio Tres Member Kenzieroo's Avatar
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    I like you poem, it's good. It takes a long time for me write a poem. Sometimes a random poem pops into my head, like this.

    The childish twinkle in her eyes
    Are full of surprise

    The somberness of the night makes me remorse
    And question why we had not sooner
    Divorce

    But the sweetness in her face
    Makes me think we can collaborate.

    It's poped in my head randomly, I don't really know what to make of it. Oh well.

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    It seems like people on this thread are shy
    Oh well, I tryed.

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    I won stuff for poetry when I was in high school. Didn't want this to turn awkward so I posted something. xD

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    Three Trio Tres Member Kenzieroo's Avatar
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    I know heres anouther poems

    "Bronze Like Gold"

    Tall and short and rusted
    You fill me with your ryhme
    You shine like gold
    You fill my soul
    Your bronze like gold
    Your mine.

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    Ooh, poetry. My least favorite thing in creative writing class last year. My teacher even told us all NOT to try for rhymes. I'll give it a shot.

    Lilacs:
    A repugnant odor
    Shameless beauty
    Plucked by filthy hands
    Hands drenched
    in my blood
    my sweat
    my tears

    Ten years'
    memories adrift
    in the ocean of loss
    its waves tainted
    with my blood
    my sweat
    my tears

    I lay, defeated
    in the bloody waves
    And a new voice
    prods past scars
    and seals old scrapes

    Dare I gamble again?
    Dare I risk my heart?
    Dare I accept this sweet smile?

    I take the open hand
    It smells of lilacs
    of innocence, of beauty
    of life, of hope

    She is the last
    to whom I bestow
    My blood
    my sweat
    my tears

    Shall I again be lost
    in the sea of sorrow?
    But for my heart
    I do not fear
    For it matters not
    beside her soul


    No revision. Couldn't even see more than 5 lines at a time. This is the kind of thing I'd only write with a lack of sleep and foggy contacts. I dress up a simple, shallow message that I have no experience in myself with amateur poetic language. It's a poem based on stereotypes, now that I think of it. I still haven't re-read it, because I know if I do, I'll probably delete it.

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    No it's so amazing!

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    I hate, hate writing poems. But I love reading them. Weird, huh? I really liked "Gold."

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