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    Senior Member trilokcool3's Avatar
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    neeD Help , need help plz plz REPLY 2 ME

    OK here ARE SOME manga pages that m making ....PLZ HELP ME IMPROVE IT
    plzzzzzzzzzzzz....

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    OK HERE IT GOES .....
    so till now i was jst designing characters but i now feel tat i should also specialize in making special effects and i am damn BAD AT IT.
    SO plz anyone can tell me hw i am gonna put some DETAILS IN THESE BACKGROUND EFFECTS and surroundings . if you want you can JST DOWNLOAD IT AND SHOW TO ME HERE .
    ALSO m bad at representing some SFX( sounds) in manga so help wit tat too.

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    heres another page . and i completed it ... jst wanna know if more can be done on it or no... plz help wit tis too

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    what software ya using?

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    its manga studio ex 4 for sketches, microsoft paint for dialog box , photoshop cs5 for some effects ....
    tats it

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    I don't understand how should I read this.

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    ITS SOMEWHERE in middle of the page so GEL'S (top ones) dialog comes first. then the below ones....
    but if u want you can read the below ones nd then the top ones....(IF U LIKE)
    I AM NOT BOTHERED ABOUT THE DILOGS JUST tell me how can i improve more in presentation of drawings , special effects. SFX's etc
    plz......

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    Quote Originally Posted by trilokcool3 View Post
    ITS SOMEWHERE in middle of the page so GEL'S (top ones) dialog comes first. then the below ones....
    but if u want you can read the below ones nd then the top ones....(IF U LIKE)
    I AM NOT BOTHERED ABOUT THE DILOGS JUST tell me how can i improve more in presentation of drawings , special effects. SFX's etc
    plz......
    I wasn't talking about the dialogues. I was talking about which frame should I see first and which second. I don't know the order on how it should be read this.

    Please, could you write a littler bit better? Is hard for me to understand you.

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    ok first the only thing you need is to study how to draw backgrounds, know how to shade some polygons and make them look like a destroyed rock or something.

    and second, don't make too many things happening in only one panel,

    you should've made a panel with the guy talking while holding his phone,
    then next panel the guy throws his phone, while the guy saying on the phone wait
    another panel a rocket launching
    and another last panel the guy with an awesome pose meeting his end.

    you just made all those into just one panel where it should be 4 or 5 scenes. which is why it's difficult to understand.

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    oh sorry about that ...
    its from LEFT TO RIGHT ...

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