neeD Help , need help plz plz REPLY 2 ME

**trilokcool3** · 09-30-2011, 09:33 PM

OK here ARE SOME manga pages that m making ....PLZ HELP ME IMPROVE IT
plzzzzzzzzzzzz....

**trilokcool3** · 09-30-2011, 09:38 PM

OK HERE IT GOES .....
so till now i was jst designing characters but i now feel tat i should also specialize in making special effects and i am damn BAD AT IT.
SO plz anyone can tell me hw i am gonna put some DETAILS IN THESE BACKGROUND EFFECTS and surroundings . if you want you can JST DOWNLOAD IT AND SHOW TO ME HERE .
ALSO m bad at representing some SFX( sounds) in manga so help wit tat too.

**trilokcool3** · 09-30-2011, 09:44 PM

heres another page . and i completed it ... jst wanna know if more can be done on it or no... plz help wit tis too

**ram** · 09-30-2011, 10:04 PM

what software ya using?

**trilokcool3** · 09-30-2011, 10:33 PM

its manga studio ex 4 for sketches, microsoft paint for dialog box , photoshop cs5 for some effects ....
tats it

**ClockHand** · 09-30-2011, 11:05 PM

I don't understand how should I read this.

**trilokcool3** · 09-30-2011, 11:16 PM

ITS SOMEWHERE in middle of the page so GEL'S (top ones) dialog comes first. then the below ones....
but if u want you can read the below ones nd then the top ones....(IF U LIKE)
I AM NOT BOTHERED ABOUT THE DILOGS JUST tell me how can i improve more in presentation of drawings , special effects. SFX's etc
plz......

**ClockHand** · 09-30-2011, 11:21 PM

Originally Posted by trilokcool3

ITS SOMEWHERE in middle of the page so GEL'S (top ones) dialog comes first. then the below ones....
but if u want you can read the below ones nd then the top ones....(IF U LIKE)
I AM NOT BOTHERED ABOUT THE DILOGS JUST tell me how can i improve more in presentation of drawings , special effects. SFX's etc
plz......

I wasn't talking about the dialogues. I was talking about which frame should I see first and which second. I don't know the order on how it should be read this.

Please, could you write a littler bit better? Is hard for me to understand you.

**ram** · 09-30-2011, 11:17 PM

ok first the only thing you need is to study how to draw backgrounds, know how to shade some polygons and make them look like a destroyed rock or something.

and second, don't make too many things happening in only one panel,

you should've made a panel with the guy talking while holding his phone,
then next panel the guy throws his phone, while the guy saying on the phone wait
another panel a rocket launching
and another last panel the guy with an awesome pose meeting his end.

you just made all those into just one panel where it should be 4 or 5 scenes. which is why it's difficult to understand.