I've written my own notes on the pic obviously, but I'm frustrated with it. Any critiques would be extremely helpful. (edit: her neck is too long isnt it! I was just thinking about the pose and when you raise your arm... wouldn't it make it so you can't see as much of the neck?)
Ignore the faces and the sign haha they're just placeholders... It just feels really stiff to me, which I think is a problem with a lot of things I draw. I'm just not sure how to make it not stiff
And the three of them just look off. Ugh. Also arms man... I hate them.
This is a really quick sketch of an idea for a picture thing.