Another Character design!

**Portogas** · 09-05-2011, 04:42 PM

Hello!

Long time since I've taken a look here at the forum, I have been very busy lately with school and further education. I intend to study something like illustrator and graphic designer, so I'll definitely be adding more pictures to come. I have not yet posted my "Secondo Wave" sorry for those of you who have waited but I hope to put it out soon!

Now back to the topic of the thread! I have worked long to make along story line, at last I can see light in the tunnel. Going to need some further help, unfortunately I have not English as my first language so hehe things can be difficult.

But I'm working with another main character who is named "Lake" have made a little drawing here that I want to get your opinions! This is what I like to call lazy inking, haha meaning that I haven't yet finished the image but appreciate the criticism!

I've posted a similar photo before, but I was inspired by another artist. So I dropped it and instead made another based on my own style. The Storie will be supernaturel as you probably are going to notice!

PS;

Phew, I apologize for the length of the thread.

**ram** · 09-05-2011, 04:53 PM

i think this is what the manga work and the crique corner is for.
but unless someone moves it, i'm in for it.

the character kinda has a hair that pops out of nowhere. and i think the perspective of the face is wrong.
but if the character design your asking me. it's cool

**Portogas** · 09-05-2011, 04:54 PM

Yeah I noticed it now.. my mistake... I didn't concentrate enough on the hair, my goal was to create my own character ^^

**ram** · 09-05-2011, 04:56 PM

just make a thread in the ask a mod and say that you want to move this thread to somewhere

**Portogas** · 09-05-2011, 05:01 PM

I will!

The thread will hopefully be moved to " critique corner " pleas give me your opinion there! "

**Celestial-Fox** · 09-06-2011, 01:34 AM

Hey, you've got some awesome linework going on. However, it seems like you need a little bit more work on keeping things in proportion. Right now thing look a little lopsided; try horizontally flipping the image periodically as you work on it to avoid that.

**Portogas** · 09-06-2011, 10:43 AM

Originally Posted by Celestial-Fox

Hey, you've got some awesome linework going on. However, it seems like you need a little bit more work on keeping things in proportion. Right now thing look a little lopsided; try horizontally flipping the image periodically as you work on it to avoid that.

Thank you!

I was so focused on trying to create a character, that I kinda forgot the basic stuff... but I will be looking in to it! Thanks!