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    Ying Yang Member Portogas's Avatar
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    Another Character design!

    Hello!

    Long time since I've taken a look here at the forum, I have been very busy lately with school and further education. I intend to study something like illustrator and graphic designer, so I'll definitely be adding more pictures to come. I have not yet posted my "Secondo Wave" sorry for those of you who have waited but I hope to put it out soon!

    Now back to the topic of the thread! I have worked long to make along story line, at last I can see light in the tunnel. Going to need some further help, unfortunately I have not English as my first language so hehe things can be difficult.

    But I'm working with another main character who is named "Lake" have made ​​a little drawing here that I want to get your opinions! This is what I like to call lazy inking, haha meaning that I haven't yet finished the image but appreciate the criticism!

    I've posted a similar photo before, but I was inspired by another artist. So I dropped it and instead made ​​another based on my own style. The Storie will be supernaturel as you probably are going to notice!

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    Phew, I apologize for the length of the thread.




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    i think this is what the manga work and the crique corner is for.
    but unless someone moves it, i'm in for it.

    the character kinda has a hair that pops out of nowhere. and i think the perspective of the face is wrong.
    but if the character design your asking me. it's cool

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    Ying Yang Member Portogas's Avatar
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    Yeah I noticed it now.. my mistake... I didn't concentrate enough on the hair, my goal was to create my own character ^^
    Last edited by Portogas; 09-05-2011 at 05:58 PM.

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    Zeta Members ram's Avatar
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    just make a thread in the ask a mod and say that you want to move this thread to somewhere

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    Ying Yang Member Portogas's Avatar
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    I will!


    The thread will hopefully be moved to " critique corner " pleas give me your opinion there! "
    Last edited by Portogas; 09-05-2011 at 06:04 PM.

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    Hey, you've got some awesome linework going on. However, it seems like you need a little bit more work on keeping things in proportion. Right now thing look a little lopsided; try horizontally flipping the image periodically as you work on it to avoid that.

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    Ying Yang Member Portogas's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Celestial-Fox View Post
    Hey, you've got some awesome linework going on. However, it seems like you need a little bit more work on keeping things in proportion. Right now thing look a little lopsided; try horizontally flipping the image periodically as you work on it to avoid that.

    Thank you!

    I was so focused on trying to create a character, that I kinda forgot the basic stuff... but I will be looking in to it! Thanks!

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    I agree. The right side of his chin/ his right cheek seem to be a bit out of proportion and his hair is messy but I LIKE IT!

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    Ying Yang Member Portogas's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Leannah View Post
    I agree. The right side of his chin/ his right cheek seem to be a bit out of proportion and his hair is messy but I LIKE IT!

    Thanks! I will be looking more into it ^^

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    the face looks alitttle thin but that may just be your style i like it though

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