think i rember not wanting, maybe even promising to not make these sorts of empty posts...
First, would just like to point out this is the kind of post i was looking for, short simple, too the point whats wrong and not working. only thing i could ask for more is some expansion on a few things said that are vague or advice on how to fix certain problems.
which makes a nice segue into the other thing i wanted to say. specifically a clarification on something you said, specifically what you said about the bottom lip looking weird by being flat, this is kind of vague and since that was actually an intentional design decision (well sort of looking at the inked lines compared to the original drawing i unintentionally changed and often borked up some of the lines in inking e.g the chin is meant to be pointed but the inked line for the right side of her chin is not in line with the original sketch which is likely causing to look so pointed.) i was just wondering what exactly you meant, why does it look weird?