Hello I'm new to drawing manga (started three days ago, well I have done them in the past but not seriously more like crappy doodles in my books at school:P) and I'm not very good, so please excuse me!
This is a drawing that I copied to start getting a feeling for manga, especially on this, please can you tell me whats wrong with my line work, I feel as if it's pretty bad, but I'm not really sure what to do about it.
The next three are all originals, so please give me the full story with these!
This was before I got my proper inking pen, so the lines are uniform, here i was practicing trying to draw someone in a running pose.
This is one that I'm drawing for my friend :P I am in the process of colouring it, I'll post the finished version when I'm done as I'm sure my colouring will be the definition of the word fail.
EDIT: I coloured on of the drawings above
EDIT: 2 more drawings
Coloured on of the previous drawings:
Thanks in advance for any comments you make.
PS. I dislike how it highlights the words colour, colouring ect. wrong :P 'cause I'm spelling them right, you silly Americans