Sollie the SoL's things that require C&C
Bonjo~ur everyone. I'll be swift.
Basically at first I wanted to draw Alice from touhou, but somehow got sidetracked and the result is this.
Why I left the parts under her clothing revealed, is because I wanted to keep as much anatomy intact for the sketch so that there could be some actual cc on things like proportions instead of clothing preferences =P
So yeah. Yay or nay
Hi , I'm new to MT so my critique maybe a bit......unprofessional? Anyways, I think it's okay, specially since it looks sketchy.
You spread your lines too far out. Try to put them closer together, the image will look way better. If you need to (and if your using a pencil or something erasable), erase the lines to make them a bit thinner, then if you want just make darker lines by going over the lines. That's pretty much it that I can think of :/
I do like how you didn't erase the clothes under, really cool. I'm not familiar with Touhou, but I like the little thing in the back (it looks like a girl to me) and it looks like it's shooting, even if it's not, still looks cool.
I think it's ok
I love the head of the girl.