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    Leandro's Art [just one for now]

    Well, as some of you know I'm a complete newbie. I barely can draw an emoticon xD

    But after a hard work, hours in front of a piece of paper, this 'thing' came out:



    For me it look pretty good, but there's always something wrong that we don't see. And now I call your help to point what is wrong on this picture.

    For now is just one, but I'm already planing to upload more and more art;

    =]

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    I love how large the limbs are compared to the body, and the lines for their knees/etc., it really gives the drawing a lot of character.The proportions seem realistic and the design is entertaining =) The only things I can see are small, like how the horn further away is larger than the closer one (unless the horn is actually bigger) and the line on the chest, which I would assume is supposed to be in the middle of the chest, seems like it is placed more to the left side. But like I said, they are only small things, and it seems like those hours resulted in a great piece of art =D

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    @Tsig

    You're right, the futher horny is bigger than the closer one D:
    I'll fix the chest line too, it seem out of proportion, thanks by the advices ;D

    And thanks by the "great piece of art" very kind of you; =]

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    This isn't a bad start. I like the shape of the neck, though I think it could use a little more of a cheekbone. On the chest, with the arms, it should be a little bit smaller and back in perpective. Also, the stomach line should be a continuous sort of line from the chest, and the back of the rump should be a bit rounder. Cool concept, though!

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    Regardless of the quality of the art, one thing can be said. You're one creative fellow. The quality isn't so bad either. I mean, it's not marvelous, but still looks good, if not for few errors, and those will vanish after some practice.

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    ~~>Sunny

    Ok, I'll correct that errors, an thanks ;D

    ~~>Sekator

    Thanks man, really good to hear that =]

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    Well I mean, I'm not sure if it's deliberate, but the body seems like it's sort of facing diagonal, while the neck and head is profile.
    If the body is actually side-on, then my mistake, though if it is, the neck seems to be coming out of the side.
    Also, the neck looks kinda phallic, but that's awright.

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