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    Sir-Mass-a-Lot Sylux's Avatar
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    Thank you! I know what you mean, and you were right, I went in blind @_@ Thank you again!

    Working on a new piece, both the male and female Mercers.


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    Admittedly, I'm not very good at critiquing armored peoples :X I think they both are looking good so far. Something is bothering me about the guy's neck. I don't know what exactly, but it seems like it might be uncomfortable with the neck armor twist his face/head that much away from the way his torso is facing? But I could be completely wrong, cause like I said, I'm not very good with armor!

    I really like it so far, though. Hope to see an update soon!
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    I think the neck piece is just too tall; it looks like it'd be choking him. His head shape indicates a 3/4 view, while his actual face is full front view. Also, his right (our left) eye looks slightly bigger than the other. His far arm looks unnaturally thin at the elbow.

    On the girl: Her face isn't in line with the chin (the chin's too far to the right) and her mouth is a little too low (no room for the jaw)
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    wow cool lineart!
    Tho I'd wish to see the whole draw before commenting...
    Details are awesome! May need to give them more depth (try variation of thin and thick lineart to indicate contour of armory)

    All is awesome tho! nice arts sylux
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    thx guys :3 chances are im not gonna finish that lineart tho

    im not sure what im doing


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    Cool design so far! I think his ear could stand to be a bit larger and maybe a tiny bit lower, but that's your call
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    bash the frick outta dis pls
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    The rock formations look good, but I'd crank the contrast up a bit - I feel like I can hardly see it at the moment.

    The little white bit in the left lower corner also looks like a cat to me. I need to get out more.

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    This is more of a suggestion, but you could use the rock formations to draw attention to the focal point before you move on. If I am right, the two characters are looking at the top right hand corner where I assume you are going to put something of importance. You could use the shadow contrast of the cave to also help lead the eye.

    The composition seems sound to me, I like it a lot actually. Maybe developing the foreground a bit as well? The mid and back ground are looking cool, but I don't see much in the foreground.
    The kombucha mushroom people, sitting around all day.

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    Oh, I should have explained that. I'm trying to bring attention to the characters and give a sense of a vast and dangerous area for exploration. But, I dunno how to do that.

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