dbc artworks *BANDWITH KILLER!!!*

**dbc** · 12-30-2010, 08:19 PM

looks like this forum still (a bit) dead, eh..? *killed by admin*
well, i just want to show few of my artworks ^^
comment and critique about my improvement please~

sometime i draw in 2 ways : cute and a-bit-realistic (what the...?), usually i draw in cute way
here's some of my art since the first time I submitted my art in Facebook

October 24, 2009

it's deathbycuteness

April 8, 2010

my OC - Lunar - Jack of Diamonds

August 21, 2010

it's my OC (Hatter, back) and my friend's OC (Aelice, front)

September 10, 2010 (one day before my birthday XD)

my friend's request
actually he asked me to draw a old nurse (+-40 years old) but i draw it too young

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**dbc** · 12-30-2010, 08:20 PM

November 17, 2010

my OC - The Moon Queen (or The Moon Princess???!)

November 30, 2010

actually i want to submit it for a "Search for a New Admin" competition, but i lost my confidence

December 30, 2010

for "Black Jack Bunny Brigade" Project in dA, i want to submit it, but i have no scanner, and near my house there's a place to scan pics but the scanner was broken, so... it's an EPIC FAIL

(#3)

**dbc** · 12-30-2010, 08:22 PM

don't mind about this weird and small pic

also about these doodles and sketches

(#4)

**dbc** · 12-30-2010, 08:24 PM

or even about this graffiti!

(the words in that graffiti isn't "XI - Language Program" but "XI-Bahasa" which written in Indonesia Language and can be translated as "XI - Language Program" in English)

sorry if i post too many pics, but i really feel curious about my improvement

Your comments and critiques really help me to improve my drawing ^^
thanks for your attention

NB : sorry for these super big pics, i used Samsung Corby TXT and i don't know how to change the camera resolution

looks like i have a new record as the the longest post in this forum, oops, just kidding XP

**Tsig** · 12-30-2010, 08:41 PM

From the looks of it, it seems like you've improved a lot in the last year. I love how the people on the page are holding onto the panel, it's so cute! Haha and I love the sinister smile on the bunny one. I can't really see much to critique, since it all looks pretty good to me =)

>.> I'm having a hard time making out the "language program" part of the last picture. It's probably just me though, I've always been bad at seeing stuff like that, like with optical illusions.

**dbc** · 12-30-2010, 08:57 PM

thank you so much >w Is that so? I thought that panel pic was one of the biggest fail in my life XD
That's good that people appreciate it ^^v
I also love that bunny smile, I'll kidnap that bunny if he exist in real world XDD
oh, it's okay, anyway, thanks for your comment ^^

Originally Posted by Tsig

>.> I'm having a hard time making out the "language program" part of the last picture. It's probably just me though, I've always been bad at seeing stuff like that, like with optical illusions.

oops, looks like something wrong. Sorry, sorry, i really a stupid girl... Well, let me make it clear now, the words in that graffiti isn't "XI - Language Program" but "XI-Bahasa" which written in Indonesia Language and can be translated as "XI - Language Program" in English. I'm pretty sorry for this. I'll edit my post. >.<

**Tsig** · 12-30-2010, 09:08 PM

Haha that makes more sense =) I can see it clear now, and it's a sweet design. Lol now I feel stupid for sitting, staring at my screen, trying to figure out if the words were like on top of each other or something.

**dbc** · 12-31-2010, 05:14 AM

yeah XD
thanks so much, but i think i'm still bad in creating graffiti because i ever heard that unreadable graffiti is the best, i really want to make the unreadable one but it's so hard T_T
No, i'm the stupid one because i can't explain it well
Once again i really sorry to make you confused DX

**Tanatos** · 12-31-2010, 10:04 AM

You're good on the "cuteness" business. xD

But on the second pic, aren't those legs too long? o.o They look good, but they are really long xD

I like this one:

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/8493/dec30.jpg

there's a style

**axion** · 12-31-2010, 01:13 PM

dude
i. love. your. stuff.
your generally cute anime style is lovely

firstly. i want a coloured pic from you! vibrant colours would look good on your work especially watercolours

in my opinion i think you could make your drawings better by making more use of the folds in the clothes
and learn abit of the facial anatomy to get the faces seem more natural, just try and get the curves in

....yeah that last sentences probably didnt make sense lol

anywayid like to some new eyes from you
to make your males and female characters stand out more from each other
so have a look at abit of bleach manga, just for the eyes

actually screw that last bit
go on da look at an artist you have a similar style to (aswell as someone you look up to as an artist)
and study some of there eye works
http://destinyblue.deviantart.com/ar...lar+eyes&qo=26
thats just a set of eyes i think you could have a look at

http://xxxshadowsxxx.deviantart.com/...lar+eyes&qo=38
and try having ago at studying the shape of the eyes (not only these eyes ofcourse! they are just an example LOL)

i think your head will open up more by having a look at the different eyes while also trying them out and experimenting
although making a new eye can be hard but mixing around some ideas will do just fine

lastly thicken your main lines

and spike out some parts, who know it could work towards your stoof

p.s if my critic is utter S*** please do not hunt me down and tie me to a pole and shoot me.

thank you have a nice day

oh and you should read this it might brighten your day

http://oomizuao.deviantart.com/#/d34j6ab