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Thread: Help me get better by being a critic. Just don't be all mean. I could cry.

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    Devilish Member Slurpee's Avatar
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    Very cute. The hips are a bit big. Post more!

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    Senior Member trilokcool3's Avatar
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    yeah THATS THE WAY ITS DONE
    but kinda mouth is looking odd TAKE A LITTLE BIT TOP (dont make mouth not so close to chin....)

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    Devilish Member Slurpee's Avatar
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    good, but show that she has her elbow so it looks more like its bending.

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    - The arm/hand/gun looks way too small. Especially if you take foreshortening into account.
    - It looks like something was stuff under the shirt. Especially since you could see the side of her breast by her armpit. It's like you used two photos for reference, thus her chest is point in the wrong direction compare to other parts of the body.
    - You should be careful about how the breast relates to the shoulder. When you look at anatomy pictures, you see that the pectoralis is connected to the deltoid.

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    I wanna be mean. .

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    First - That looks like american cartoon. Body is not proportional.
    Grade: D-
    Second - I am not Elfen Lied fan, but good.
    Grade: B

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    101 Dalmations Member GAbRieLWrIgHt's Avatar
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    @Tagyurit go ahead the title was a joke, hahaha (unless it wasn't remotely amusing)
    @scanten i know the body proportion is off, i drew tat a while ago.

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    I like the hair and eye on the second pic.

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    She's pretty buff, eh...? If you want to make her that big, you should try some sort of more masculine muscle definition. After all, nothin' wrong with a toned woman!

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