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    101 Dalmations Member ScarletHue's Avatar
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    I'll focus on the second one.

    You want to know about the anatomy of it, well the first thing that sticks out to me is the arm muscles. Particularly the bicep and it's connection to the elbow. The bicep looks 'boxy' when it should be more curved (even the most defined biceps are curved rather than square like this.) The elbow seems some how elongated. Try to think of the elbow as a sphere that connects the two parts of the arm, then you will see that it's not possible for it to be how you have drawn it.

    The head also seems to jerk unnaturally forward.

    But it's not the anatomy that really throws me off here, nor the design (The design is actually pretty cool). But the shading you've given to the chest seems bizarre to me. I don't know if that's a style thing you have created or if you've seen it in a manga style that I haven't seen but personally it confuses my eye. It makes me wonder if his chest is moving with speed and they are motion lines? It also makes me feel like he doesn't have another arm, sorta like rayman.

    The hand is pretty well drawn though, seems like it would have been a tricky pose to draw the hand in too so a good job there.

    Someone else should do leg anatomy because..well I don't really know!

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    First pic everything is cool except the right foot, hands and the face looks a bit flat. The foot looks like there is no joint connecting the foot with the leg, and the left one looks good so its all the more noticable. the hands are...well bad. And i mean it. The rest of the drawing is cool, proportionally, anatomically great but the hands....welll more practice! For the face....well add just a little bit of shading and that should fix it.

    Second one

    ....can i just ask one thing? How the heck does he hold his gun? And why is the butt of it (which is supposed to be under ones arm pit or pushed against ones shoulder) resting on the side of his neck ....the side where the trigger hand isnt holding the handle of the gun ???

    Legs veary looong
    Face pretty cool
    the clothes design pretty cool

    So concluson.

    DO MORE HAND STUDYS!!!
    Keep going at it. Its really gone for better since the last time saw one of your drawings!
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    ok i will fix those areas.
    And about shades , yes i go for those parallel lines may be i should do the shades more specifically where its needed.
    @gedeon
    hmm... Can't really visualize those areas especially hands and backside of the gun resting. Ok i need some hand practice and i will do it. Is it alright if i go for complex hand poses rather than simpler pose ?
    About 1st pic ok , i will work out more.
    THANK YOU BOTH OF YOU.

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    Apart from the hands I see nothing else wrong with them they are both very awesome also I wouldn't suggest going straight to complex hand formations, try some simple ones like the hand spread out or the fingers held together and if all goes well then progress onto the harder material, the last thing you want to do is over complicate the learning process by trying to run before you can walk

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    ya i am currently doing those hands position. Thankyou.
    Nothing new to post so going for old work i did

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    Super Senior Member Demonfyre's Avatar
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    Awesome, she looks great Tk3 because of the foreshortening I do think you could have made the left knee and leg a little larger as it seems the same size as the right, and I think there is something with head or its positioning but I'm struggling to describe what it is :/ maybe if someone else will be able to describe it

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    The head is shaped wrong. A bent head looks different. Check your foreshortening, use ref, yadayadaya.
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    Senior Member trilokcool3's Avatar
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    Oh thankyou DEMON and ALMANAC. I will look for
    1. Head
    2. Legs
    hmm... I am just away from my computer so i will edit it when i get chance and sure to put in 100theme challenge .

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    this one is pure EXPERIMENT ... i drew what i could imagine .... but i couldnt show enough details...
    anyways (WITHOUT REFERENCE IS ALWAYS DIFFICULT AS HELL)

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    This is neat looking so far. I haven't any critiques for it right now, but I do wonder if this is a WIP? I'd like to see it with a little more detail (I like the unfinished look, too, but it'd be neat to see you take it a bit further )
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