BozArts: More empty Promises

[marsrover]

Just wanted to say that your art improved SOOOOOO nicely.
Looking at the dates, looks like you've been drawing for about 1 year.
You are on a higher level than me so I can't really crituqe but I can encourage you.
So Good Job.
~that's all~

[BozeSG]

Thanks man, that means a lot...

[BozeSG]

I did another one and tried to keep the things everyone said in mind, so... please C&C on this one as well...

Edit: i know their expressions are weird...

[BozeSG]

I really should stop drawing laughing people.... anyway, please C&C...

[apples13]

your stuff seems stiff. the shading needs work because it does not make sense for the most part.
you need to understand why there is shading in each spot and not assume. are you using your mouse to draw?
it seems like you are.

[ram]

lol... >.< that's one of my biggest mistake...
not lowering the opacity of the line layer before coloring..
because of that the line stand out so much

are you using your mouse to draw?
it seems like you are.

nah he's using a tablet.. >.<
if anyone.. I'm the one using a mouse

[BozeSG]

@apples13: yeah, and they look more stiff than before lately, my exams are going to be over tomorrow so i guess i'll have more free time to work on them more.
ouch, dunno why, but that mouse comment hurt my pride a bit... lol, i guess i shouldn't think about colouring everything so soon and stick more with getting my line art better...

@ramiel: I should lower the opacity?! thanks for the tip, i'll try it the next time i colour something...

[ram]

you should go to the gb more often dude >.< it's better to draw where you can see how people draw...
and you can find out about a lot of different drawing styles... >.<

[Rio]

Leaving the line art black and obvious isn't a crime. There are people out there who leave it for stylistic purposes. Anyways, you should always consider the end result you want. If you like thick and obvious line art - go for it! If you want it more subtle, do that instead!

[ram]

hmm well i guess so >.< come to think of it I always go for game cgs.. >.< most colored manga does have their lines thick and obvious line art... >.< so just forget what i said boz.. or you could do it how you want to... >.<
i choose to follow how touhou when it comes to cging >.< so just do it how you want and follow who you want to follow