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    Sir-Mass-a-Lot Sylux's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Matt View Post
    My first three points, I can see where style would enter into it--mostly the hair highlights. The other two, I'm still a bit wary of.

    I still think the skew is a problem, regardless of style.

    Chuchu, while I'm here, I should probably mention that the manga panel in post #12 looks awesome. I don't regard complements as highly as I used to, but that one just stuck out to me.
    This is not true, some people have very asymmetrical faces. My father has one, and I am personally starting to develop one. From a frontal view, it's very obvious how asymmetrical I am.

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    Thats all ok, but i still think that she wasn''t going for the asymmetrical look. So i think its ok to say that t hat was a mistake.
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    Mmm, yes, considering he's Serbian, he might.... overwork the ladies. Don't need that.

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    I agree with Ged and Matt. Facial asymmetry is in the nuances of faces: eye shape, nose shape, and lips, generally. In this example, the figure's entire left-side jaw is offset.

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    So is mine QQ I have jaw disorder

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    Sorry for taking so long to reply, thanks to everyone who posted!

    @Matt thanks for taking the time to do a redline, I really appreciate that and it was helpful too. ^^ I didn't think the hair was too shiny, I though it was rather plain; so thanks for pointing that out to me. I have a long way to go with coloring it seems. I've noted the rest of the things you said and I'll keep them in mind.
    And thanks for the compliment on the manga panel!!!

    @Psy Thanks for that bit of advice, I should have taken that into consideration in the first place. ><

    And yeah, it's safe to say a skewed up the face.

    Anyway while I'm on the forum here is something I inked this morning. I was practicing a pose for a manga scene and decided to go ahead and ink it.

    Last edited by Chuchu; 04-02-2012 at 02:00 PM.

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    what is going on in that panel? heil hitler?

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    lol, does it really look like that?!!! I hope that's not the reason everyone was giving it weird looks! XD
    But no, she's just...um...reaching out for someone, ya know...

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    I love the movement it has. Great work!

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    Quote Originally Posted by ScarletHue View Post
    I love the movement it has. Great work!
    thanks! ^.^

    This is an older drawing I posted back in Feb as a wip, but it's with original colors now. I'm trying to get my darn scanner to scan the background in! >.<

    heheh, even if the anatomy is a bit weird I had fun with this...until I had to cover parts with more hair when I remembered who I was drawing it for. XD

    tippsyy~

    Last edited by Chuchu; 04-08-2012 at 10:12 PM.

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    Great imagination and natural understanding of perspective.. need a little work on anatomy, and proportions.. I really dig your lines pretty crisp and clean.. and you've got your own style going on here... just gotta make it look more natural

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