Well, everything's very clean and easy to look at, which is a HUGE plus =) I really like the tone you chose for the Lady Cleo's dress, since it just seems to work perfectly for the texture. However, her bangs seem skin-tight where they end, so it might be better to have them stick out from the forehead more. And the bottom of her skirt could use some more folds, since she's sitting down and crossing her legs. If you look at your clothing at home and sit down, you can see where these folds are, which might help you draw them. Overall, good job =) That's a hard pose to draw.