BB's Crit Thread - Return from Death

[Regantor]

Since you're using a weird style alot of stuff is going to be subjective, but I really think he could have done with far bigger hands and much thinner legs. Or perhaps much thicker arms to counterbalance the legs?

Honestly, you can draw people with limbs like spaghetti at this point, it's all about image balance.

Right now it sort of looks like his legs are in an upwards perspective whilst his upper torso is not, at least to me.

Hope my input isn't too much of a bummer. -_-

[Bacon_Barbarian]

JJJ: Yeah, I didn't catch that. Thanks for pointing that out to me.
Demonfyre: Thanks broski.
Reg: Naaaaaaaaah, it's fine. I think I know what needs fixing.

But anyway. Something I initially drew a bit ago and recently made ... nicer(?), I guess. Inspired by The Ghost of St. Valentine by Bayside.



I still feel like I could make it nicer somehow. Color or something. But I'm really bad at that. Alas. Perhaps I could seek out a tutorial.

[toast]

I think all I need to say about the hand is to do the same pose with your hand and compare. Pay attention to where the fingers bend, what angle they point to, and also pay attention to the thumb. That nostril is quite tiny as well.

Otherwise, this is cool. I think the cross shading could have been planned out a lot better, as the neck's shading is quite random. Also, if you do end up coloring this, don't just jump into it. Plan your colour pallet out. In fact, just read up extensively on colour theory and don't be retarded. Choose colours that compliment each other.

[Bacon_Barbarian]

Yeah. I totally messed up the middle finger and shading the neck. Alas. I'm thinking I'll end up revising it. Anyway. This thing. It's called "All Alone." Started this in the summer and only now just got around to doing a finalized picture.

[Evil_Cake]

whats that he holding?

[JJJorgie]

Looks pretty cool! You shouldn't be able to so the entire bottom of his show, though, unless it was partially off his foot.

[Bacon_Barbarian]

It's suppose to be an apple.

[Dante13]

the right foot isn't correct sorry i cant explain why(i know why but i don't know how should i explain....sorry)

[Bacon_Barbarian]

Whatever man, JJJ pointed it out.

Anyway. Birdie. More specifically, a sparrow.

[Prince of Angels]

Birdie! I love it it's very nice.