Very nice shoe
Good, but you could be better
So-so, you're getting there
Try working a bit harder
Glad you like it, guys. Sorry I've been gone. Something I drew earlier today.
I forgot how much fun it can be to draw without a tablet every one and a while. This took, like, 50 minutes? *goes back to working on One Shot*
You've improved quite a bit it seems, BB. Nice anatomy, and the outfit is quite excellent. The pose, oh, it's very nice, all the details are nicely done, and the hand looks great. I love the sickle, it's a very nice touch. I could only hope to improve as well as you have, BB.
Haha, thanks Liebe. I hope your artistic endeavors go as well as you've said mine have. Anyway. Drew this in school a day or two ago and only just go to inking it. Friend says it looks like something from Power Rangers. Thoughts?
I appreciate the sentiment, my good buddy, but it may take a while before I make it to your level, ha ha ha.
Now as for your new addition, the details on the ensamble are magnificent, great work on the armor, very nice work on the pose. The double-handed battle axe was also drawn quite well, I applaud your effort. I would do well to learn what I can from you.
Practice, practice, practice!! Eh?
Second character profile from the One Shot (full profile can be found in thread) ... As, like last time, I am not looking for crit in that thread (well, not on these anyway) but I am here.
Yeah. I hate coloring. :/
You're getting quite good as an artist, but I think you could do even better, my friend .
Keep it up.
What liebe said. I really like the armored guy. BUT i think his arm is put much too near the body and thus the axe would have been twisted somehow.
Marcus is cool, BUT he has a buff body, which makes me think he is mature. BUT the head-to-body ratio makes him a steroid 11 year old.Coloring is good although more shadows wouldn't hurt.
I agree with Ged.
As a highschool student Marcus should probably be somewhat closer to around 7 or 8 heads tall, not 6. His arms and what I can see of his actual legs are also much too wide for his body. Watch out for that line on the top of the shoulder too, it really creates the impression that his arm is attached like an action figure's. I quite like the hands and facial anatomy (though his chin is a bit small). Good job. :)
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