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Thread: BB's Crit Thread - Color and Line Width

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    Fifty Fifty Member Bacon_Barbarian's Avatar
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    Jesus christ how are you so fast.
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    Because I can't get enough of you

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    I will take that as a non-stalker compliment. :|

    What did you mean by frantic, not placed well or rushed?
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    Think he means the way the lines are placed, it looks as if there are a couple of light sources, lighting can be hard, keeping a mental note when colouring of where the light is coming from will help you heaps when placing shading or even placing a small x where the light is coming from will help you remember, I think it would look really good if you shaded the lines in the colour of the materials you are shading, would give it more depth

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    Yeah... I tried going for multiple light sources. The lightsaber (he has a fancy toy that lights up!) and off to the left (his right). :/
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    I actually think the shoes are pretty good, especially with the detailing. I would just suggest to make the top part of the viewer's right shoe a little narrower. When you view human feet from the front, they kinda give off a slightly trapezoidal shape. (:

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    I'm really likin' how much you post, Bacon. It shows effort.

    With this latest one, his torso is to short. It really is. It also shouldn't be in 3/4 view unless you want to move his right leg so the knee is comming toward us and angle his other foot away from us.

    I hope to see more from you, man!
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    Jai: Anatomy! I will master you yet!!
    Seefy: Yeah. I gotta work on them feet. Those are tough...

    Speaking of which, some doodlin' from Study Hall.





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    ^ that flower LOL

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    cool shoe

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