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Thread: BB's Crit Thread - Color and Line Width

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    Fifty Fifty Member Bacon_Barbarian's Avatar
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    Maxx: Huh, I (had) thought I did a pretty good job on her hand. I get what you're saying though. You're right about the face and cloth though. I need to work on where folds and such go...

    Ceefy: My pen was totally running dry when I inked Lordgenome, it could've been better! Leg note noted... Glad you like the costumes!

    Gedeon: Yeah, my dad pointed out I messed up the hand in that picture as well... I was going for DYNAMIC! as opposed to realistic. Glad you like the pose though.

    So, messing around with my costume book again. A girl this time! :O



    I totally butchered her right arm, and her face bugs me. Not sure why though... But, that's what C&C is for. ^_^
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    Ooh, I like her expression and he way your drew the rolled sleeves~ I think the arms are a little too long for the body, but they're a nice shape and the hands are good. (RAAAGH, HANDSSS.)

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    Really? Hmmmm. You like some of the stuff I really didn't.

    Anyway, was drawing some faces...

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    The first one looks like it came out of an old school poster haha

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    lol. He's a fun guy to be around. So much for doing something like this everyday this week. *coughs* I didn't realize how badly I had messed up the girls face... Anyway, some peoplez.



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    With the girl, I see two problems. The hand is pretty big and the elbowless arm should be more defined to be behind the chest. The chest shouldn't come in that far, which will tuck the arm behind it and make the arm look more "natural"

    As for the boy (sorry but reminds me of Avatar the last Airbender) his left hand has 5 fingers and no thumb. if you didn't want this, then shorten the total length of the inner finger (where I am assuming the thumb is) to about the second knuckle of the pinky, then drag the deviding line (the line between the thumb and the hand) almost completely down (or in this case up) the hand. when I mimic that pose with my hand, the crack caused by the thumb leaves about 1 inch of skin undevided. Also, the nerves of the hand only show when your fingers are closed yet the hand stays open, so that hand won't show his nerve endings.

    hope that helps

    PS: your guys look awesome by the way! Koodos on you

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    Yo dawg that looks schweet but I think you should study folds and whatnot it's really fun and challenging, and especially rewarding

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    MW: *coughs* That’s actually a guy, heheh. Point taken though. Especially about the hands. Always have to be working on that hands. :|

    Glad you like it though. :3

    Sy: Yeah. Good point. I've drawn folds when freehanding pictures of people, but I don't really have a good grasp on where to implement folds when I'm drawing something out of my head. :/

    Anyway, as you can tell, a little bit of everything:

    Face study:



    PIMP of one of Rei's old characters. Don't hate me ... >.>



    And an OC. I'm really proud of this. :3

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    I'd be super excited to see a folds study from you! >:3

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    So basically ... Go draw people who are wearing clothes with folds? *doesn't really know how to go about on a study - Unless his face things are studies*
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