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Thread: BB's Crit Thread - Color and Line Width

  1. #51
    Sir-Mass-a-Lot Sylux's Avatar
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    Uguu~! Your tangible stuffs are sugoi!

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    Is this charcoal pencil? Because if not, you have some wicked control over it. :O

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    @Sketti: Yeah, right *grabs Weaboo translator* ... Thanks.

    @Ceefy: Uh ... I can't actually remember. I did these in July. Some of it is, some of it isn't. I'm pretty sure the last two aren't, but the first one definitely is, and I think the second one was done in pencil as well.

    *goes rummaging around through deviantArt*

    Here's some slightly older stuff that I know I didn't do with a pencil. (I apologize if I've posted these before, but I don't think I have.)


    Eggs


    D&D Dice and bag.
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    Super Senior Member Celestial-Fox's Avatar
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    Oh, wow. You kick my butt at charcoal, then! Haha. I'm so messy. FINGERPRINTS. EVERYWHERE. XD

    But your stuff is a good start! I like that you dealt with the D&D dice; those are unusual shapes and really interesting. The bag is also a nice shape; it really does look soft and a little floppy. (Lol, I'm so bad with explaining what I mean somethimessss.) I would say that you need to watch out for becoming too dependent on lines, though. Try to avoid outlining things, and rely more on shading to make the shapes pop.

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    Hehehe, I'm still pretty messy. And yeah, I know what you mean. I think I was starting to get that down with the pea pod (third drawing down) on the last page ... I can't wait to mess with charcoal again now. Haha.
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    So, the last picture from my art class ... I think.

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    Argh! Do your pieces take you a long time? Also the dice are my fave :3

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    Uhh, sometimes. I was at the dice for probably an hour or so, maybe longer. The stuff on page 5 was actually (sort of) done under a time challenge and took maybe 25 minutes max.
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    I really like the contour drawings @_@

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    Oh yeah, those were fun. I was talking about the Charcoal taking 25 minutes or so, but the Contours took about the same amount of time. Back to comics for now, I don't currently have anyway to upload the last few pieces from my art class ...


    Character from a friend's comic. Needs work (Hands are too big). Meh.
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