Jaidurn's Art: Experimenting

[Captain_Neko]

Yeah it's hard, but you can still make your work a little neater. and I think Bo lin's ear should be a little higher.

[jaidurn]

Sylux: Honestly, I like Mako's design better.

CN: Yeah, I see that too. I think it's because it's actually a little long.

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I'm just gonna leave this here.

[Sylux]

Mako is definitely a more handsome guy. Also you don't get a really cool and well thought-out comment until I get one om the drawing I made of YOU for chrissake.

[Celestial-Fox]

That's a super cool portrait, Jai. The technique is used really well.

[Sylux]

Baby you ready for dis? Okay here goez. First of all, that girl is absolutely gorgeous! If she is real I must meet her, if she isn't, then we must make a cyborg model of her so I can stare at her beauty as she makes me absolutely delectible sandwiches. I've seen your recurring technique in many works, and even just the technique is improving. Bb jaibutt i luvs it

[Gedeon]

The technique is really cool...but i am confuse with the whit patches. What are those supposed to be?

[jaidurn]

Sylux: Man you're rad. I drew Ellie Goulding by the way.

Seefy: Aw shucks.

Gedeon: They're supposed to be the extreme highlights in her hair. I better find a better way to do them.

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Just a small Sokka Sketch.

[Celestial-Fox]

Looks good! I think you should try sketching with more fluid, intentional lins, because here I don't see a lot of confidence and instead read a lot of guesswork. Also, I think it would benefit you to work on noses, because I can tell that there's some deeply engrained symbology in your head that's keeping you from drawing them in their true form instead of their symbol form. Your noses look very round, bulbous, and much like how they teach you how to draw them in grade school ---> (.U.)

I think you should do a practice page of noses from different angles in different shapes to try to get a feel for them.

You did a good job, though! I could definitely tell it was Sokka, even without the thread title. I like that you gave him an expression (ACCURAAATE), and you textured his jacket. c:

[jaidurn]

Seefy: I've been told that I'm not confident enough with my lines, before. I must admit I'm not overly comfortable with drawing yet. I'm more analytic with my art. :C

BUT HEY. Will these noses do? :O

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The WYLL thread is great for reference

[Celestial-Fox]

Uuuuunf

Some of those noses

Are so sexy. No lie.

I don't see MY nose up there! (But don't worry; it's an irregular shape, so it's no very useful to know about. XD)