baka-neko art thread :D

**baka-neko** · 07-09-2011, 04:42 AM

Hi,

I've started this thread for having a little comments and critiques about my drawings...

Let's start with this one:

I actually started to learn to draw in chibi style recently, what do you think about this drawing ? Also what do you think about the coloring ?

Thanks in advance

**ram** · 07-09-2011, 05:05 AM

the coloring is really good! but you didn't put any shadows in the hair xD
but it's a good idea that you put lights in the skin! and pattern in the stocking..

as for the chibi goes.. i can't really comment cause we have different style on drawing chibi
but you have nice style of drawing chibi and i really like it!

edit: my style is more like this

SPOILER! :

**baka-neko** · 07-09-2011, 05:24 AM

@ramiel:
Thanks for your comment

Indeed, the hair appears a little flat without shadows... Actually I'm not very good in adding shadows and I think I need some training... Does the shadows on the body feels right ?
By the way, I don't know if it is visible but the paterns in the stocking are actually stars

(the cloth: USA flag...)

**ram** · 07-09-2011, 05:59 AM

Originally Posted by baka-neko

Does the shadows on the body feels right ?

actually i don't know where the light is coming from... but there are other people out there that make shadows in the body just random and ignore the rules to make it look awesome..
but if your basing it on accurate ones then i would likely say there are a lot light in there...

**baka-neko** · 07-09-2011, 06:17 AM

Actually I did not think accuratelly about the lighting... the light comes from the right but I did not respect this for everything...

UPDATE: I've added some shadows in the hair, and some highlights:

**Scarletlight** · 07-09-2011, 06:35 AM

shes cute! I love the style.

**ram** · 07-09-2011, 06:39 AM

nice dude... just make some shadows for the hair in back of the head.. you did put some shadow but it's not enough.
also make some shadow for the eye whites..
and shadow in the skin coming from the hair