Need a critique on the first 2 panels on the layout and the "art style" I used or if I could of done it better......?


then for my 3rd panel(below)
I need help with drawing that third panel....Its supposed to be a group of 4 scientist that are running through a forest(on a path) with the perspective decreasing further back and the angle of camera is somewhat above them.....help?


but I have no real idea how this is supposed to look.....so yeah....


Link:http://kingfromhatena.deviantart.com...anel-214086585