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    I'll do a bit of 'page by page' too. Page 1 ...

    I'll do a bit of 'page by page' too.

    Page 1

    The first close-up of the horse, rider and girl split across two panels: that's good, and I figured that the image was split to focus attention...
  2. And maybe have the characters speaking to each...

    And maybe have the characters speaking to each other, and write each character's reaction to each other in the conversation.
  3. A character's style of speaking is an extension...

    A character's style of speaking is an extension of the character's personality. A character's vocabulary is effected by by the vocabulary that the character has been exposed too (vocabulary in the...
  4. Sorry I haven't around much. I've been busy. ...

    Sorry I haven't around much. I've been busy.

    I'll try to read chapter 1 sometime soon.
  5. I haven't read the chapters yet, but reading the...

    I haven't read the chapters yet, but reading the comments...

    From what I read in chapter 4, Siren is the most powerful person around, and she doesn't fear much, except for the rippers. But if...
  6. You know, I'm going to read the story and...

    You know, I'm going to read the story and probably give critiques here.
  7. Critiques are given in the spolier tags. ...

    Critiques are given in the spolier tags.

    Given that this is not the beginning of the story, and parts of the story reference events that happened in the past, would you mind providing a synopsis...
  8. I've put the critique between paragraphs of the...

    I've put the critique between paragraphs of the story.



    The first paragraph tells something very specific about Siren's character. She was quick to judge other people without getting to know...
  9. Thread: Hello~

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    Thank you~

    Thank you~
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    Regantor, sorry if I made you seem like a jerk. ...

    Regantor, sorry if I made you seem like a jerk. AlmanacnamedTime pointed to your comments and basically said 'I agree with him.' Then I addressed those comments, which probably made you feel like a...
  11. Thread: Hello~

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    Thanks~ ^^

    Thanks~ ^^
  12. That depends. Did it accomplish what you...

    That depends. Did it accomplish what you intended? Was it the only, or best, way that you were able to accomplish it?



    Writing characters and planning a story are not mutually exclusive, but...
  13. Thread: Yooo

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    :) Welcome, awesome girl!

    :) Welcome, awesome girl!
  14. Thread: Hello~

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    O.o ...I am? NO! I'm alright! D: The voice...

    O.o ...I am?

    NO! I'm alright! D: The voice in my head told me so!
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    That makes sense. According to U.S. law, any...

    That makes sense. According to U.S. law, any moment something is uploaded to a website, it is published. If the website records who the thing was uploaded by, and the date that it was uploaded, it...
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    If you make a copy for yourself, to simply...

    If you make a copy for yourself, to simply practice your art, chances are that the copyright holder will not care about you copying the photograph. And there may be a law that allows a person to...
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    That's why they don't do it. That's also the...

    That's why they don't do it. That's also the reason why comic book companies don't complain when the comic book artists draw commissions at conventions, even though the artists are infringing the...
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    Different countries have different rules about...

    Different countries have different rules about how much a piece of artwork must be changed before it classed as a 'derivative work.'

    That being said, if it's a character or some other...
  19. In the Dramatic Scriptwriting course that I took...

    In the Dramatic Scriptwriting course that I took at college (an elective), the professor told us how to write a movie script.

    Start with 3 Beats (or 3 main points in the story. Turning points, if...
  20. Thread: Hello~

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    Thank you!

    Thank you!
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    Yeah, I learned that the hard way. One...

    Yeah, I learned that the hard way.

    One annoyance is that when I pasted it to the board, it didn't paste the underlines to any words. So I was going through the whole script and re-underlining...
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    Okay, now I understand. But I don't feel like...

    Okay, now I understand. But I don't feel like typing out a synopsis for every episode (when I write, I write the script from beginning to end. No synopsis, etc). It's been a very busy week. So I...
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    Because a synopsis won't show the detail, like...

    Because a synopsis won't show the detail, like facial expression or emphasis on dialog, that an artist would need to draw the characters within the 'feel' and context of each scene. And that's what I...
  24. Hi ClockHand! The contract will state that...

    Hi ClockHand!

    The contract will state that everyone involved in the production can request to look at the bookkeeping that pertains to their portion of the income, at any time. And I will provide...
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    Hi Regantor! I did read some of the Black...

    Hi Regantor!

    I did read some of the Black Lagoon manga, and watched a few episodes of the series, but this isn't anything like that. Even though Haruto's introduction may appear that way, the...
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