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  1. - The arm/hand/gun looks way too small....

    - The arm/hand/gun looks way too small. Especially if you take foreshortening into account.
    - It looks like something was stuff under the shirt. Especially since you could see the side of her breast...
  2. Thread: weez's art

    by KayleL
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    You need to practice drawing lines. This is...

    You need to practice drawing lines. This is especially true with anime.

    It looks like you are drawing lines very slowly, which is causing a wiggling effect. I am guilty of this to this very day....
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    Beware of the feet. It looks like he is floating...

    Beware of the feet. It looks like he is floating because the vanish point doesn't line up.
    http://i.imgur.com/No7Jz.jpg

    Please have a look at this.
    http://i.imgur.com/6coqK.png
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    This is far from perfect, but I hope my hack...

    This is far from perfect, but I hope my hack together photoshop job would give you some ideas on proportion. Don't be concern about the head count on the Loomis drawing. The idea is where elbows are...
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    Right now, she looks too flat. There are simple...

    Right now, she looks too flat. There are simple tricks you could use to instantly make your picture look better. The body isn't flat, so when clothes wraps around a person, you need to represent that...
  6. Thread: KayleL Sketches

    by KayleL
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    Right now, I am going back and forth between two...

    Right now, I am going back and forth between two authors. Bridgman and Burne Hogarth. I find that Bridgman is too loose while Hogarth is too fine, and precise, which makes quick sketched a little...
  7. http://i.imgur.com/gTx3v.jpg A couple of...

    http://i.imgur.com/gTx3v.jpg
    A couple of pointers

    1. The back needs to face more to us. All the weight is on the left arm, this would cause the right shoulder to twist more.

    2. One leg is...
  8. Thread: KayleL Sketches

    by KayleL
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    KayleL Sketches

    Hello everybody!

    It's been a while since I been here, and I didn't even post much when I was last here. I must say that I like the redesigned website.

    Since I don't do anime often, I uploaded...
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