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    not heroin or anything. She's just cutting...

    not heroin or anything. She's just cutting herself with a needle as if it were a knife.
  2. I really liked it. I would love to see it with...

    I really liked it. I would love to see it with more detail. Especially in between conversations. Some of them were fine, but it just bugged me how you didn't explain any sort of movement or anything...
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    Thanks Matt. This is just the sort of crit I was...

    Thanks Matt. This is just the sort of crit I was looking for. I liked what you said about "relatability". I forgot about that much when it came to story writing. And the part about showing an example...
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    Short story for crit

    It's been a while since I last wrote of story so my skills are a bit dry at the moment, but here's something that I wrote just the other day. I tried to make it sad since that sad themes are my...
  5. Thread: I'm back

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    Haha, yeah, I remember you GunZet, but that's...

    Haha, yeah, I remember you GunZet, but that's only because you've kept the same avatar. Evil_Cake... I'm pretty sure I remember you, but you changed your avatar. But yeah, I have a lot of catching up...
  6. I loved the new beginning and the way you only...

    I loved the new beginning and the way you only "glanced at Siren" (displayed her appearance but left possible movements to nothing, making her a bit of a mysterious, and actually, a more menacing...
  7. Thread: I'm back

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    I'm back

    Wow, this place is looking nice. My congrats Rio. It's been over a year now since I've been on here. Almost forgot about the place. Hope it's just as much fun as it used to be :) Hi everyone.
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    I like it :) It's sad, but makes you wonder. One...

    I like it :) It's sad, but makes you wonder. One of my favorite sort of poems to read. Keep up the good work.
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    Just some advise, I think you could maybe post a...

    Just some advise, I think you could maybe post a short story or something with as much detail as you can put in it, and have it crit and see what you need to work on with your detail or anything...
  10. I love you work :) Can't say much more than...

    I love you work :) Can't say much more than Gedeon though.
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    I liked the way you expressed and described his...

    I liked the way you expressed and described his feeling like Fenn said. Really good (:
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    Awesome art! I love it!

    Awesome art! I love it!
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    My fave is the first :)

    My fave is the first :)
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    So you have anything yet Son?

    So you have anything yet Son?
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    so do you have anything angel_dreamer?

    so do you have anything angel_dreamer?
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    By the way Fenn, when I moved the third thread to...

    By the way Fenn, when I moved the third thread to this site, no one really came back. So if you get any new members then send them to the 3rd thread.
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    By the way, when I moved the third thread to this...

    By the way, when I moved the third thread to this site, no one really came back. So if you get any new members then send them to the 3rd thread.
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    Haha. I don't see why not.

    Haha. I don't see why not.
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    Look at the first post by Fenn. He has the list...

    Look at the first post by Fenn. He has the list in it of the order people will post
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    I thought you already had an order...?

    I thought you already had an order...?
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    Its been decided to go back to the old posting...

    Its been decided to go back to the old posting order Fenn. Instead of going in no order, you need to make a list of your group and tell them when to go in that order. You can go ahead and post your...
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    Its been decided to go back to the old posting...

    Its been decided to go back to the old posting order Dr.Pumpkin. Instead of going in no order, you need to go in order according to the list of people.

    1.DrPumpkin
    2.Son44
    3.sawyer
    4.Avy16...
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    Poll: Okay, We will be doing it the old way again.

    Okay, We will be doing it the old way again.
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    Okay, lets start this. I'm going to try...

    Okay, lets start this. I'm going to try befriending all of you so that I can pm you once its your turn. We are going to start doing it in order again, so it is matt's turn. So whenever you're ready....
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    I did when I was a kid. Now I have thick...

    I did when I was a kid. Now I have thick knuckles. And the last time I swung a bowling ball, it wouldn't come off my thumb.
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