Amazing as always my friend. I like how he's only partially visible, rising from the darkness; quite appropriate for Batman.
This might be my own opinion on color but green and red often "clash"...
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Amazing as always my friend. I like how he's only partially visible, rising from the darkness; quite appropriate for Batman.
This might be my own opinion on color but green and red often "clash"...
I wish I had more time right now, I would totally pimp that. I like the original as is anyway.
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d63/DarkMousysMinion/lynxsketcheseditedsmaller.jpg~original
Which do you like better? Left or right? Why?
If anyone's seen Game of Thrones I'm preparing to make...
Nice work! You've got a lot of interesting stuff going on here. It is indeed hard to comment. I like that you're experimenting. I can't say I understand every picture but it's nice to see an artist...
JJorgie: Aw thank you. Newer pieces on the way.
Aether: Refined is an interesting word to use. I understand you probably are referring to how clean or tight my lines were and how smooth the color...
dem thighs. Very cool piece, I really like the stocking-type markings. Also a fan of the wing-arms. I favor the idea that angels are more like bird-people rather than just people with wings.
Why thank you Linz <3. And Morfedly, I appreciate the kind wishes. It was for my friend's boyfriend ha. I'm actually working on art for my bf right now.
Per Linz's request, here is some old art....
I'm right in assuming MTer's now can have two art threads...true? One in critique corner, the other here?
For anyone who doesn't know, my name's Chii. I used to be really active on here. Then I...
Hey Gaff, thanks a ton for the comment. Your advice is extremely helpful, I agree with both. The kid in the front is supposed to be a smaller 12-year-old but the pickaxe makes him look tiny. I hadn't...
:cough: now that my story workshop is over and I'm not drowning in AS many projects. Here's my most recent commission, just finished last night:...
A great start! I like the pose you were going for with the couple, very cute. Here's a red line of it with a drawover of the redline afterwards:
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Hi there :D. This is beautiful. Would look wondaful all cleaned up I'm sure. I did a redline of my thoughts:
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d63/DarkMousysMinion/ArielRedlineforPheonix.jpg
Demonfyre & Rio: Thank you for the advice, I agree that more whites and probably more contrast too would help Blitz look a lot more like an actual robot. The seem on the punching bag in front is an...
Thank you Psy and Rio for your comments on my previous piece.
Hey guys. I'm not going to say too much but I will post a speed painting I just kind of finished (you never really finish a speed...
Ha he looks quite infuriated. An amusing concept though. Is it supposed to resemble or actually be Sasuke from Naruto?
Critique:
-The composition is great but his proportions are somewhat odd to...
The face is looking great :). Definitely needs more contrast but I'm sure it will be beautiful when finished. Is this for a larger painting?
I like these. It's always fun to emulate another artist's style. You did a good job.
Points:
-I don't know if it's just me but as an extreme nit pick, her right breast (so the one we see on the...
Wow. Been a while since I saw an environment painter on here. I adore your work, you are very talented. I think my favorite part about the newest piece is the purple mushrooms. They are adorable. The...
Very nice sketch :). She is quite appealing. She doesn't seem to have big hips to me...perhaps just personal opinion?
Notes:
-I don't find her arms to be too short, just EXTREMELY thin,...
Thank you for any kind words given.
Clockhand: oo you're a critical one. Thank you for taking the time to express your opinions; they are appreciated.
I agree on some things and disagree on...
this is very cute. I like the pose and the style, although common in the anime/manga world, is nicely done. I won't comment on the face so as to not repeat demonfyre's critique. I will say the folds...
Aww. This is cute. Although how exactly is the core idea untranslatable? I read Japanese and could easily see this translated in English. 英語、日本語で読めるのはやさしいでしょう。
Also, while manga traditionally...
Hey everyone. My name is Chii. どうぞよろしくおねがいします。
I've been drawing for a long time. In the depths of the internet, one can probably find my long lost art thread from when I was active on here a few...
It's kind of hard to jump in after these works have been critiqued already. For one, you've definitely improved since the last time I've been on here. Which, well....is a long time.
Second, I...
Hola! So you've got massive potential. I really like the painting style you're developing and some of the ideas in your pieces. A few notes...
Your painted pieces seem to be much stronger than...