thanks i will update when i finish this or maybe when i finish line art
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thanks i will update when i finish this or maybe when i finish line art
It's got a lot of potential. I'm looking forward to seeing you tighten up the lines and add more detail. C:
That sketchy style... those inky lines! They're sooo Rembrandt! :D
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Lookin good, dude. Very clean lines. Though I'd say the mouth is a bit small.
i think i like the rough sketch better... you shouldn't have removed the lines in the eyes and her accessory in the hair..
check first page for finished mami
The only issue I have with it is the torso (the way the form curves into its shape) is slightly (oh, god, ever so very slightly!) wide. That's just my layman's critique. Other than that, it's fantastic.