My Manga AMATEUR.
Hi everyone so as the tittle says in this thread i will present my manga amateur.
i will try to upload the evryday page that i a draw.
here is a short resume:
our story bring us to a magical world were there is an floating island that no one have been able to access before. This island hide a mysterious enigma that no one have discover yet, To access to this island it is required to have a talisman which is located in the world. Our young hero named TITIO has a big dream, is to become the first magical hunter to fund the talisman. this is how the journey of our hero is about to start.
Here is a link that contain a version of the chapter 1 that I consider as a one shot. The real chapter 1 will be available on 10 April:
you could also read the chapter 2 here:
i hope you will really enjoy reading it. see you ^_^
ps: sorry for the english mistake english its not my first language but i try my best
Well, you're certainly very blunt w/ your intro.
Also, in the 2nd panel (the 1st w/ dialouge), the dialouge could use some work. You end the first 2 sentances with "now" which becomes rendundant and doesn't read well. Also his shoulder slopes up in a way where we should see that the gap that is his armpit.
Is Englush your first language? Because "Me too I want to follow you" is horrible grammar, and I know horrible grammar. Young to leave the dynasty should be "too young" ... There are more but those are the ones that stand out.
thank you for your comment. to answer your question, i am not english and english it's not my first language.
hi!! i have been really busy with my study and working on my manga . i finally fiinished my chapter one ( i will do some quick correction) and upload it online for everyone who would like to read it. here is a preview.