um...The ending was a lot better than the beginning >->.I'm guessing this is hip hop your going for? some pop n lock maybe? Id say try to remember that there's a time to be slow and smooth, and there's a time to really hit it on the beat. Also, it is good that you make your own moves, but you are in a very tight box when you dance...try to expand outside of it a little more. But ya I agree with Gunz. This is the most entertaining thing I've seen in this WYLL thread, and in ALL the past ones.

