the drums are too loud when they come in and also it sounds kind of weird since there's p much no build up to it. Also u need to do more than just come up with 1 thing and repeat it. Tho i do the same thing a lot, im trying to not do it anymore. listen to how other songs are constructed and you'll get an idea of how to construct your own song.
John have you seen any reviews by todd in the shadows
i dont think so, is he that dude who reviewed the new strokes album and you posted the video around here somewhere a while ago?
no that's anthony fantano
todd in the shadows reviews billboard hit songs and (usually) shits all over them
oh that sounds cool lol. Do you listen to Death Grips btw i can't remember if i've asked you b4
not really I tried to but couldn't get into it
hmm what did you listen to
the album that fantano reviewed idr which one it was
as long as it was their first mixtape, that's their best imo