Yeah first one has too much going on second one I told you I can't sing over the same chord played over and over again.
okay I'll keep working away
Uh I was practicing a bit and this sort of came to me so I decided to record it
John you were taking too long so I wrote this song the lyrics dont mean anything ok they dont matter
nice song, your voice is getting really good. It reminds me a bit of Nick Thorburn for some reason. And yeah, sorry I'm taking so long with the music. Some stuff's been going on and I can't really write anything decent right now.
You're gonna redo that whole song btw with a proper intro and stuff the chords are just C, Fm, and Gm
Work hard please